Tuesday, November 17, 2009

Can anyone help me make a love poem?

I need to use at least 4 words from this list:


BROOD


EVENTUALLY


EXALTATION


LURK


NOISOME


RAVISHING


SHEER


SINISTER


STEEP


AND SURVEY.


It must be at least 14 lines


and has to rhyme.


Any suggestions


on how to start it??

Can anyone help me make a love poem?
The ravishing lass, once pretty in frocks


Is now a plain Jane, washing clothes on the rocks


The life she once knew,.... so young and fancy-free


Is gone like the tide..... she could no longer flee


Her brood of six children who frolicked in the waves


While she fantasized ' bout the life that she craves


She hated her role as the fisherman's wife


Her need for excitement cut like a knife


But her eyes strayed to Laura, and then to her brother


They all deserved better than her for a mother


She watched the steep cliffs, rising high in the sky


And the birds as they circled, soaring freely nearby


She envisioned herself standing tall on the bluff


and knew that by far she was not brave enough...


To follow her sinister thought to conclusion


Her daydream was done, the end of her illusion!
Reply:I write poems all the time since I was 12 yrs old (1987). My advise is be alone, close your eyes, imagine a love scene or remember a love moment that happened to you or someone else, then write it on paper (this isn't the poem, just your love story), then start your first line with one of your chosen words and this will help you just start writing what comes to you, you may have to think and re-think if you want these particular words in your poem. You may surprise yourself and find other words to substitute the ones you chosen. If you want you can start with a first line I came up with with your chosen words and work off that. Totally up to you, it should be your own, can use it as an example. Title: Compassion First couple of Lines: As I see you through steep hills, my desire for you puts me at a stand still, Your sheer presents makes me lurk for more, Eventually we will meet, That's all I will reveal for you. Let me know if you need more help. Good luck
Reply:the best way to start is roses are red,violets are blue...lok ate there...you already have one line...im so smart
Reply:The ***.. by Malakai the Dark





Your *** is so large and sinister,


That it makes me consider becoming a minister,


But the price I'd pay is way too steep,


As that sinster *** lurks in my sleep,


But have no fear,


though that *** is large, and oh so sheer,


I'll maintain my wits and never brood,


For I am an awesome dude,


Though I know eventually,


That ravishing monster will consume me,


Exaltations, praise and more,


should be sung by those that adore,


for the man with hopes oh so deep,


has fallen into that ***-crack oh so steep.








There, every word, 14 lines and rhymes!!
Reply:your face is as ravishing as a star lit night


the sheer look you give puts me in fright


the journey to your heart is soon to be steep


my passion lurks just waiting to leap


you will eventually see my true desire


Noisome like a burning fire


My exaltation back is just the same


Brood yet soft passionate and tame


Sinister to my heart and deep soul


Survey my love and take it whole


Its intense to know how we both feel


Longing for emotion not sure is real
Reply:Ravishing Roses are red,


Sheer fabrics are sexy if blue,


Steep mountains are really beautiful,


But not as beautiful as you.





Sinister people might break us,


Let's take a survey and see,


What people think of me asking you to,


Eventually be with me.





Ok that's all I've got..... have fun!
Reply:I lurk with love


eventually ill brood


its a steep hill..


ur very noisome
Reply:no hill too steep


no river too deep


i brood and eventually reach my decision......
Reply:Sorry I would help but this is kind of hard and it is really tough to make a poem with all these words i hate poems that have a length.I wish you the best of lucks!!
Reply:O, my love is so steep


as the river is deep


yet eventually you will see


the ravishing side of me


and the veil will fall; unleash my true light


as we lurk through the dark black night








haha corny much?
Reply:I am a loose poet, meaning my poems never rhyme and are straight from emotions, so I really can't help you.





Try to use those words in the beginning of the line rather than the end, because you might have a easier time rhyming it that way.


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