I need to use at least 4 words from this list:
BROOD
EVENTUALLY
EXALTATION
LURK
NOISOME
RAVISHING
SHEER
SINISTER
STEEP
AND SURVEY.
It must be at least 14 lines
and has to rhyme.
Any suggestions
on how to start it??
Can anyone help me make a love poem?
The ravishing lass, once pretty in frocks
Is now a plain Jane, washing clothes on the rocks
The life she once knew,.... so young and fancy-free
Is gone like the tide..... she could no longer flee
Her brood of six children who frolicked in the waves
While she fantasized ' bout the life that she craves
She hated her role as the fisherman's wife
Her need for excitement cut like a knife
But her eyes strayed to Laura, and then to her brother
They all deserved better than her for a mother
She watched the steep cliffs, rising high in the sky
And the birds as they circled, soaring freely nearby
She envisioned herself standing tall on the bluff
and knew that by far she was not brave enough...
To follow her sinister thought to conclusion
Her daydream was done, the end of her illusion!
Reply:I write poems all the time since I was 12 yrs old (1987). My advise is be alone, close your eyes, imagine a love scene or remember a love moment that happened to you or someone else, then write it on paper (this isn't the poem, just your love story), then start your first line with one of your chosen words and this will help you just start writing what comes to you, you may have to think and re-think if you want these particular words in your poem. You may surprise yourself and find other words to substitute the ones you chosen. If you want you can start with a first line I came up with with your chosen words and work off that. Totally up to you, it should be your own, can use it as an example. Title: Compassion First couple of Lines: As I see you through steep hills, my desire for you puts me at a stand still, Your sheer presents makes me lurk for more, Eventually we will meet, That's all I will reveal for you. Let me know if you need more help. Good luck
Reply:the best way to start is roses are red,violets are blue...lok ate there...you already have one line...im so smart
Reply:The ***.. by Malakai the Dark
Your *** is so large and sinister,
That it makes me consider becoming a minister,
But the price I'd pay is way too steep,
As that sinster *** lurks in my sleep,
But have no fear,
though that *** is large, and oh so sheer,
I'll maintain my wits and never brood,
For I am an awesome dude,
Though I know eventually,
That ravishing monster will consume me,
Exaltations, praise and more,
should be sung by those that adore,
for the man with hopes oh so deep,
has fallen into that ***-crack oh so steep.
There, every word, 14 lines and rhymes!!
Reply:your face is as ravishing as a star lit night
the sheer look you give puts me in fright
the journey to your heart is soon to be steep
my passion lurks just waiting to leap
you will eventually see my true desire
Noisome like a burning fire
My exaltation back is just the same
Brood yet soft passionate and tame
Sinister to my heart and deep soul
Survey my love and take it whole
Its intense to know how we both feel
Longing for emotion not sure is real
Reply:Ravishing Roses are red,
Sheer fabrics are sexy if blue,
Steep mountains are really beautiful,
But not as beautiful as you.
Sinister people might break us,
Let's take a survey and see,
What people think of me asking you to,
Eventually be with me.
Ok that's all I've got..... have fun!
Reply:I lurk with love
eventually ill brood
its a steep hill..
ur very noisome
Reply:no hill too steep
no river too deep
i brood and eventually reach my decision......
Reply:Sorry I would help but this is kind of hard and it is really tough to make a poem with all these words i hate poems that have a length.I wish you the best of lucks!!
Reply:O, my love is so steep
as the river is deep
yet eventually you will see
the ravishing side of me
and the veil will fall; unleash my true light
as we lurk through the dark black night
haha corny much?
Reply:I am a loose poet, meaning my poems never rhyme and are straight from emotions, so I really can't help you.
Try to use those words in the beginning of the line rather than the end, because you might have a easier time rhyming it that way.
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